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    Talking I'm writing a song (tell me your opinion)

    Just imagine a cheesy Casio playing in the background.

    Why do you love me? Why do you need me? Always and forever... We met in a chatroom, now our love can fully bloom... Sure the world wide web is great, but you, you make me salivate... Yes, I love technology, but not as much as you, you see... But I STILL love technology... Always and forever. Our love is like a flock of doves, flying up to heaven above... always and forever, always and forever... Why do you need me? Why do you love me? Always and forever...

    :rolleyes:

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    Sry about this Big Daddy but i hate it I am sry

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    ode to Dehawk. :wilted_ro

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    Wink

    Quote Originally Posted by spoofee12
    Sry about this Big Daddy but i hate it I am sry
    Hate is a very strong word don't you think? ;)

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    Is this for your wife?

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    Quote Originally Posted by bluesky
    Is this for your wife?
    :secret: I can't divulge that information.:secret: :34:

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    This song sounds very familiar. Is your wifes name LaFonda? ;)

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    Quote Originally Posted by SharonL
    This song sounds very familiar. Is your wifes name LaFonda? ;)
    :secret:Close. :secret:

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    Oh OH I know I know!!!!!!

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    Cool

    Hmmmm, BD.......How do I put this......:o




















    Oh, I Know...............














    IT STINKS!
    Sorry, BD, but you DID want opinions....
    Dont kill me, ok???

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    Take this part out and put something else in then I would sound ok:Sure the world wide web is great, but you, you make me salivate... Yes, I love technology, but not as much as you, you see... But I STILL love technology... Always and forever

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    Everyone's a critc. :( :( :(

    BTW, does this format make the song better for anyone?

    Why do you love me?
    Why do you need me?
    Always and forever

    We met in a chat room
    Where love can fully bloom
    Sure the World Wide Web is great
    But you, you make me salivate

    Yes I love technology
    But not as much as you, you see
    But I still love technology
    Always and forever

    Our love is like a flock of doves
    Flying up to heaven above
    Always and forever
    Always and forever

    Yes, your love is truly great
    Always and forever

    Why do you need me?
    Why do you love me?

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    Makes more sense that way. Not all of us are good at reading music and stuff. Gawd!!

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    Well you wanted our opinion!

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    I don't understand. How is this a song? Is this not a poem? For me, a song requires melody and such. As a poem it's nice and if you gave it to your wife I'm sure you would receive a nice reward. Poems work almost as good as fancy dinners and flowers and cost a lot less.

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